In our group storyboard we have included several elements from each of our own individual storyboards that we created. In frames 8 and 12, we incorporated Joe's idea of a point of view shot from the antagonists position, this means the camera shot will be filmed as if he is wearing a mask. This was an inspiration from the original 'Halloween' film. This frame allowed me and Reggie to see Joe's idea and the features of a thriller that it would generate, such as low key lighting and hidden identity.
We included the long shot feature of my storyboard, these long shots consist of the victim and the antagonist. The reason we included this feature in our group storyboard was because it creates the atmosphere of isolation as we can clearly see the empty background. This allows the audience to identify the fact that the victim is helpless and alone, thus therefore will create a relationship. We included this element of my storyboard as it generates the convention that this creates is a vulnerable female victim.
In using the group storyboard it enabled us to split our narrative into separate sections, this allowed us to see where we wanted low key lighting, diegetic sound, editing etc. This is helpful as when we are filming we can make sure that each element that we require for each shot is available. Using the group storyboard has also enabled us to not only note the key elements that we will be featuring in each frame but also conduct a sketch to make it easier for each member of our group to visualise our ideas.
I think our storyboard is very good and has been managed very well as it has broke our opening sequence down into separate segments making it easier to understand and also make it easier for filming. I found that the ideas each member of our group put forward were very helpful as we have built a very well structured storyboard. I thought it was a little bit tough incorporating all of our ideas into one storyboard as we had to leave some out. But overall I do believe that we have made the best possible storyboard with the ideas that we had.
You have explained the purpose of a group storyboard and provided relevant and detailed examples of what you have taken from group member's individual ideas. Try including one or two more examples of ideas taken on board and explain how your ideas will be conventional to the thriller genre.
ReplyDeleteTo improve your post you need to:
1) Include one or two more examples of ideas taken on board
2) Relate all ideas back to the thriller genre
3) In your summary, mention how you think the audience will react to your idea etc.
you have given a good overall analysis of your group storyboard, mentioning where ideas were taken from etc.
ReplyDelete1) Include a brief summary after each page stating what you have included and why in terms of micro-elements (cinematography etc) and how the audience will be able to relate to, build a relationship with characters etc.